Practice FSWE Essay 2
Please evaluate my practice FSWE essay.
The actual essay is evaluated from 1 to 12 with 12 being the highest score. I believe that last year the passing score was a 6.
I handwrote this essay in 50 minutes in accordance with the rules of the FSWE. I will present it without spellchecking or editing so to represent the actual essay as it was written.
When evaluating please be aware of the following:
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Please be critical. I want to improve my essay writing skills as much as I can for the test and beyond.
Thank you for your help.
Yours,
trv
The actual essay is evaluated from 1 to 12 with 12 being the highest score. I believe that last year the passing score was a 6.
I handwrote this essay in 50 minutes in accordance with the rules of the FSWE. I will present it without spellchecking or editing so to represent the actual essay as it was written.
When evaluating please be aware of the following:
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The topic:
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My essay:
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My outline:
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Please be critical. I want to improve my essay writing skills as much as I can for the test and beyond.
Thank you for your help.
Yours,
trv