March 3rd, 2006

Practice FSWE Essay 3

Please evaluate my practice FSWE essay.

Testing Rubric:
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I handwrote this essay in 50 minutes in accordance with the rules of the FSWE. I will present it without spellchecking or editing so to represent the actual essay as it was written.

When evaluating please be aware of the following:
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The topic:
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My essay:
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Please be critical. I want to improve my essay writing skills as much as I can for the test and beyond.

Thank you for your help.


Nervous 緊張

Journal for 2005-3-3 Fri..
Weather: Cloudy Plan: Akagi JHS

I didn't have any classes today so I wrote another essay. I'm still not good at it but I am practicing hard. Please read it and comment on it of you have time. I corrected the practice test the 9th graders took on Wednesday after I was done. They really need to work harder. I really need to work harder, too. I am really nervous about the Foreign Service exam. Study Study!

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Today's Kanji
Meaning (意味): commit

Chinese Reading (音読み):
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Vocabulary (単語):
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Trevor Lalish-Menagh